if you only knew
all that i'd do
not to lose you
my heart's in pain
no sunshine just rain
a tear stain
i'm going insane
you can save me
just try to be
not you and i, but we

together you see
the hurt is real
my soul you kill
my spirit you steal
and yet i feel
locked in your heart
can't break apart
or know where to start
its abstract art
complex at best
is there any rest
is this a test
were on a quest
can we last
and let go the past
our love's been cast
and true and vast
we can withstand
the test of time and
of each other demand
love thats grand
respect, honesty
patience, humility
compassion, loyalty
infinitely, all eternity.
2 comments:
wonderful
sexy
beautiful
poetic
perfect rythem
u r a pool of talent
i must admit
keep up the good work
poems have always been my weaker point....forget writing.....even if i understand them i consider it an achievement....and i thnk poems are gud when they are abstruse.....so gud job as per my standards.....
keep it up and more abstruse.....
Adios
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