Thursday, May 22, 2008

Lets Try Again

Feeling so sad, so blue
if you only knew
all that i'd do

not to lose you

my heart's in pain

no sunshine just rain

a tear stain

i'm going insane

you can save me

just try to be

not you and i, but we

together you see

the hurt is real

my soul you kill

my spirit you steal

and yet i feel

locked in your heart

can't break apart

or know where to start

its abstract art

complex at best

is there any rest

is this a test

were on a quest

can we last

and let go the past

our love's been cast

and true and vast

we can withstand

the test of time and

of each other demand

love thats grand

respect, honesty

patience, humility

compassion, loyalty

infinitely, all eternity
.

2 comments:

conceptADI said...

wonderful
sexy
beautiful
poetic

perfect rythem
u r a pool of talent
i must admit

keep up the good work

Anky said...

poems have always been my weaker point....forget writing.....even if i understand them i consider it an achievement....and i thnk poems are gud when they are abstruse.....so gud job as per my standards.....

keep it up and more abstruse.....

Adios

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